During the day you carry the sun
Beaming down on me
At night the moon and the stars
Dreaming as I sleep.
When all is good you are blue
Clouds gently float across
When something goes wrong
Water begins to drop.
You will never have a limit
There is no end in sight
You will go on forever
Brining me day and night.
(Skinny didn't look right.)
Fun Poem!I think you did a really good job. I like how short and simple it was. I agree with you that the "skinny" looked a little weird. I'm glad you did yours the way you did. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. I like how you used such descriptive words, it made it easy to relate to.
ReplyDeleteWe'll have to talk about the decisions poets regarding line length. :)
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